So, you've finished your manuscript. After the party, what's the first step?
"What!? No, I want to keep working on it. In two months, I want my manuscript here:"Step #1: LEAVE THE MANUSCRIPT ALONE... FOR AT LEAST TWO WEEKS. I LEAVE IT TWO MONTHS.
"Why is it important to let your manuscript sit?" Well, why is it important to let wine sit? Well...? I don't know, I'm asking you. But, it's important to let your manuscript sit so that when you begin the revision process, you begin it with FRESH EYES.
"What am I suppose to do for two months?" Plenty.
I've compiled a list:
- Start a new book... In two months you may be close to finishing a second book. Also, because you're focusing on a new story, your mind will not be focusing on the wording of the last.
- Go on holiday.
- When was the last time you've painted your house?
- Could you watch all the seasons of your favorite shows? Here's a few you could try: Coronation Street, The Simpsons, Law & Order (all series), or Doctor Who.
- Read... try all Agatha Christie in order of publication.
- Take up playing the violin. Your family will love you or you could be dead. Either way, two months will fly by. However, take note, if violin playing causes you to lose fingers that you will need to edit with, perhaps take up another instrument. Singing.
- Oh yeah, and send the manuscript to some trusted reader. That means you don't want to send it to your mother. You want honest feedback, you want criticism. You don't want: "Oh, so this is the reason you were too busy to come visit your father and I. You know, in a few years we'll be dead and you'll regret wasting your time on a silly book... Read it? Oh, I'll read it, you obviously feel I have nothing better to do. Picking up after your father and your brother, I do it in my sleep..." Well, you get the point.
Okay, two months have passed. You made it!
Now what?
Step #2: READ IT THROUGH ONCE WITH A SMALL NOTEBOOK.
I say small because this isn't the time to make revisions, it's the time to record major revisions. Thing such as:
1)The Plot
- Is the plot logical?
- Are all loose ends tied up sufficiently?
- Enough plot twists?
- For mystery writers: Enough clues? Are the clues hidden enough? Enough red-herrings?
- Are you consistent?
- Does it switch back and forth making it hard to follow?
- How is the narrator's voice?
- Is the MC likable?
- Have you put too much backstory into the first few chapters?
- Have you described him/her enough?
- Have you resolved the MC's inner journey?
- Does she defeat the antagonist in a way that satisfies the reader?
- Is the character consistent and yet naturally changing throughout the story?
- Have you really explained his/her motives? Why they do what they do? Why he/she acts the way he/she acts?
- Does he have a big enough role?
- Does he seem plausible?


20 comments:
I don't ever plan on letting my manuscript sit because my life is mostly interruptions. I planned to let my wip sit for a week and it ended up being six weeks. Then it got interrupted for another month only a couple weeks after I got started on the second draft. But I know most people don't lead my life, so it's great advice for the 'normal' writer.
Clarissa - Such great ideas for making sure the manuscript is really ready. I agree that stepping away is a very wise decision. It allows the author to see whatever flaws there are and make them better. It also allows those wonderful beta readers the chance to get their input in. All in all, a terrific idea. But I must admit, it's very difficult to discipline oneself to do that when Barnes and Noble seems so tempting....
I really enjoy all the insight you provide a novice like myself. I'm still in the "learning the voices" phase but do appreciate the sharing of your process. :)
Trying To Get Over The Rainbow
Wow. This is great. I am far from finishing my manuscript (only just started!), but I know this will prove so useful when I get there. And boy, I think I'm going to need that break!
Thanks for this Clarissa. Will be reading the rest of this series with interest!
Carol, yeah. Especially with first books, writers can be so excited it's difficult but I know that with me, I find it easier to let go especially knowing that I have other projects to keep me busy with writing.
Margot,exactly. However, most won't get to B&N without proper edits so hopefully they take the advice of many writers: wait before revision.
Jules, glad you liked it. Hope it comes in handy in the future.
AlphaChick - oh, I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully the rest will be just as insightful.
CD
Good stuff. I look forward to the rest in your series. :]
Thanks, Amanda, glad you liked it.
CD
Great tips! I try to let my MS sit for at least a month before I come back to it. I really need to get that perspective!
Good evening from Italy Clarissa. I am just calling by to thankyou for becoming my latest follower of My Book review blog it is appreciated.
I am not a writer just a blogger and an avid reader but I did find this article about leaving ones manuscript interesting. Good Luck with your work.
Excellent advice! And I love your post title LOL!
Talli, exactly, the perspective is so important. I'm the same way.
LindyLouMac, glad to have found your blog.
Thank you for your kind comment.
KarenG, glad you liked it. I'm horrible at titles.
CD
This is excellent. I have no problems letting my ms sit - it's getting back to it for the second round that's tough! I love the idea of going through it with a notebook first, instead of marking up the proofs. You're so right - it's major revision time first.
Belle, yes, it's important to look at the big picture first before you start changing sentences around.
CD
If I can just finish, I promise to step away. However, I've already watched all of my shows on NetFlix and Hulu!
Alex, I'm lost as to what to suggest. What about rewatching episodes of Stargate? I love the one where O'Neill and the other guy always goes back in time and repeats it over and over again.
CD
mines gonna sit for 3 weeks and i plan on reading as many books as possible!! Sooo looking forward to it :)
Great insights into hair and appearance for women! I keep my hair long because I feel like my facial features are too big and bubly for a short cut. I wonder if it's making me look too young, though. Hmmm.....I'm going to the hairdresser tomorrow. Maybe I'll experiment!
OOps my reply was for another post not this one. Oh well.
Nicole, I'm glad you can do it so easily. Can't wait to read it.
Aubrie, thanks for the comment. I hope that whatever hair cut you choose, you're happy with it. Perhaps you can post a photo?
CD
I can't wait to finish my first draft and just leave it alone and start something else! Can. Not. Wait!
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