Friday, 29 July 2011

Clarissa's Recommendation

Because I'm such a mystery fan, and I try my best to be a supportive blogger, I'm excited to announce that Dorte Jakobsen from djskrimiblog is releasing her new cosy mystery book on August 1st.

It will be for sale via Barnes & Noble, Sony, Kobo, Diesel and Apple.

Price: $3.99 (However, you can use this Smashwords coupon PN22N and get the book for $2.99.)
Check out her site for more information.
Buy the book here!
Check out Dorte's blog here!

Thursday, 28 July 2011

Using Real Life Crime Stories to Launch your Mystery Narrative

By Nancy Farrell

Today, I am honored to have Nancy Farrell as guest writer. She writes some amazing posts for the Criminal Justice Degrees Guide blog. After reading this post, check out the blog, it has some amazing posts. Take it away, Nancy!

As many writers purveying writing advice over the centuries have mentioned before, it is essential to write what you know, or at least to write what you know about. If you are into the mystery or crime genre, then it is probable that you don't have much first-hand experience in serious criminal activity. In lieu of actually participating in a murder or fraud or any of the various crimes that are typical fodder for mystery novels, there is another way that you can gain experience vicariously—just read the newspaper.

As a writer who has delved into the mystery genre before, I can say without hesitation that the best place to look for ideas for stories is out there in the Real World. I’m sure you've heard the expression, "The truth is stranger than fiction." And the most interesting stories or novels, the ones that really grab readers' attentions, are those that put forth a narrative that takes twists and turns that are at once both believable and still out of this world. If you look at various high-profile crime stories, you can instantly see the seeds of brilliant narratives that have much potential in becoming integrated into your novel or story in one way or another.

One of the best most recent examples is the Casey Anthony case. Of course, you cannot turn a real life story into a published narrative without running the risk of being sued for libel or another related crime. At the same time, however, you can integrate general story line elements to create a plot that and a set of characters that creates dramatic conflict. In the case of the Anthony trial, the story of a mother accused of murdering her child, whose trial was so filled with so much circumstantial evidence against her that the ending—the verdict being not guilty-- makes for a highly complex and emotional story. Another fascinating recent story that comes to mind is the Amanda Knox trial, in which, again, circumstantial evidence convicted a young woman of murdering her roommate during a study abroad trial.

The most famous narrative that was based on a true crime story was Truman Capote's In Cold Blood, a creative non-fiction work that dramatized a real trial in which the suspect had no immediate or apparent motives. The twists and turns in the real-life case enabled Capote to create a story with very conflicted and complex characters. So if you find yourself creating a mystery story or novel, and you do not yet have much direction or details laid out in your story, run a crime search in newspapers to look for inspiration. Even if you cannot take major plot points from these stories, if you do some research, you'd be surprised by how learning some details of different criminal proceedings can help enhance your story's conflict and believability. Trust me, it makes a word of a difference.

Author Bio:
Nancy Farrell is a freelance writer and blogger. She regularly contributes to the criminal justice degrees, which discusses about child abuse, human rights, divorce, and crime related articles.
Questions or comments can be sent to: nancy.farrell13@gmail.com.

Picture source: here

Wednesday, 27 July 2011

Clarissa's Writing Post: Titles

Soon, I will have to start thinking of titles for my book... or my publisher will. My working title was The Sholes Key but I didn't like it and, what a shock, neither did my publisher. So, it has to be changed. (I hope I have some say in what my title will be but we'll see.)

Over the next few weeks I'm going to be analyzing the title:
(1) How have authors come up with their titles?
(2) Does having a good title make a difference in sales?
(3) How many words should your title be?

So where do authors come up with their titles?

Twilight (The Twilight Saga, Book 1)First, let's look at Stephenie Meyers and her book Twilight. On her website, she said, "Twilight was not the easiest book to title. When I started sending out queries, I called it Forks for lack of a better idea. The first thing my agent advised me was that the title was going to have to change. We played around with a lot of different titles, and nothing seemed to convey the right feel. We brainstormed through emails for about a week. The word twilight was on a list of "words with atmosphere" that I sent her. Though these words were meant to be used in combination with something else, the word twilight stood out to both of us. We decided to try it out, and, after a little adjustment time, it started to work for both of us. It isn't absolutely perfect; to be honest, I don't think there is a perfect title for this book (or if there is, I've never heard it)."

Pride and PrejudiceSecond, we have Jane Austen and her popular book Pride and Prejudice. It is thought that she renamed the story Pride and Prejudice from First Impressions because she had in mind the final chapter of Fanny Burney's Cecilia, called "Pride and Prejudice", where the phrase appears three times in block capitals. It is possible that the novel's original title was altered to avoid confusion with other works. In the years between the completion of First Impressions and its revision into Pride and Prejudice, two other works had been published under that name: a novel by Margaret Holford and a comedy by Horace Smith. [Source]

The Mermaids SingingLastly, a book written by Val McDermid titled The Mermaid Singing. She says the title is part of a line from the poem The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by T. S. Eliot.
I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each.
I do not think that they will sing to me.


Have you heard any interesting stories about how authors have picked their titles? How did you choose yours?

Tuesday, 26 July 2011

Clarissa's Death by...Candle

Note: These posts are meant as research and ideas for the lowly mystery writers. Do not try anything you read here on yourself or anyone you know...even if they did steal your Harry Potter backpack. Killers get caught!

As a mystery writer, I'm always trying to find clever ways to kill people characters with common objects. Now, have a go at this idea: Death by Candle

Here are some classic ideas we've seen on television or in the movies:

(1) Set someones bed alight with a candle...especially while they sleep. Oops.
(2) Or perhaps a character has left a candle burning in the house. According to the National Fire Protection Association, Candles were the third leading cause of home fire injuries. These fires tripled from 1990 to 2001 with the increase in candle sales but declined somewhat since then. Candles used for light in the absence of electrical power caused 1/3 of fatal candle fires.

Or what about these sad true stories:

An eastern Indiana woman was charged with her father's death when she threw flammable liquid on his face and lit him on fire with a candle...
Read more here: The Indiana Channel

However, as mystery writers or writers in general, we can be more creative. What about these ideas?

(1) If a character is allergic to bees, could you light some beeswax candles? According to eHow.com, they have been known to cause reactions in some.
(2) Older candles with metal cores (for keeping the candle upright) used to contain lead, which is harmful when burnt. Death by lead poisoning?
(3) Could some sort of poison be placed in the candle and when burnt is released?
(4) Candle with gun powder?

Have you ever thought of murdering a character with a candle? Have you read of it happening in a novel or seen it happen on TV? 

Picture source here

Monday, 25 July 2011

Clarissa's Kindle Favourites & Great Free Reads

Easy Calculator

Price: $0.99
Producer: Mobigloo
Link: here

You can't really compare this calculator to a professional or scientific calculator, however, you can compare it to the calculator that comes with your computer or phone.

Pros:
(1) Really easy to use. Normally when you type a number in on Kindle you have to press Alt + a letter on the keypad. For example, the number 1 would be: Alt+Q. But with this calculator, one is just the letter Q.
(2) There are a lot of features. When you go to a restaurant and need a way to calculate tip or divvy up the bill, pull out your Kindle Easy Calculator! It also has a great memory feature.
(3) Unlike most calculators, this one has multiple lines. So, if you make a mistake, you can see it. Or see what numbers you've added together.
(4) If you make a mistake typing in the numbers, you can just push the delete button and retype.

Cons:
(1) You have to get used to where the numbers are on the top row. I get confused with numbers 5 and 6 because they are on the middle of the top row and so I have to count forward or back. Although there is a key above (on the screen) you don't want to keep referring to it. It took me about an hour to get used to it. 
(2) It's slow. I can add up numbers quite fast on my adding machine and using a real calculator is quite fast but with this calculator, it can take a few moments for the numbers to appear on screen.  It's not horrible though.

To sum up: If you're an accountant, this is NOT the calculator for you. However, if you need a calculator on the go or just for occasional use, this one is AWESOME!

Picture source: here 

Free Kindle Reads Of The Week!

For the mystery lover: 
(I haven't read this one yet but it looks good.) 
Of Mice and Murderers (Z-Detective Series - Book #1)

For the dessert lover:
Mother's Favorite Recipes

A Great Series:
(I've downloaded these books and looked them over,
they are very short but the advice is great.)
Stress proof your life (52 Brilliant Ideas)

Boost your memory (52 Brilliant Ideas)

Thursday, 21 July 2011

Clarissa's Interesting Facts

I've been watching the television show Mythbusters lately. Really, this show is a must for writers, it breaks common myths many think are true.

Take these example:

(1) Did you know killing someone with an ice bullet is impossible? They burn up before they reach the end of the barrel.

(2) Did you know if you shoot a gun in a plane, it doesn't blow anybody or anything through the hole? You would need to have explosives rigged to blow a huge hole and then maybe your arm will fall out. 
(3) Cola does an okay job of cleaning blood but it does a better job of cleaning your chrome bumper.

(4) Quicksand doesn't sink you as fast as it does in the movies. Most people STUCK in quicksand will die of dehydration or exposure.

(5) It's just as bad OR WORSE to drive while talking on the phone than drunk!

(6) A bullet fired from a shotgun into water will breakup. It probably wont kill you. However, it is possible to shoot any gun (barring shotgun) underwater.  
(7) Bullets fired STRAIGHT UP in the air WILL NOT kill you on descent, however, if your angle is off even slightly, you could be charged with murder. A true story: On New Years Day, my father went out to his car and found a bullet lodged in his front seat. It went straight down through the roof of the car. If he had been sitting in the driver's seat, he would be dead. Stop shooting your guns in the air, people!

Have you ever watched Mythbusters? What myths do you find interesting?

Photo from: adamsavage.com

Wednesday, 20 July 2011

Clarissa's Question: Does Spelling Matter?

 Question: I'm writing a mystery set in the U.K but the title will be for an American/Canadian audience. Should I use British or American spelling and punctuation? What would readers think? Does it matter?

Tuesday, 19 July 2011

Clarissa's Death by... Bowling Ball

Note: These posts are meant as research and ideas for the lowly mystery writers. Do not try anything you read here on yourself or anyone you know...even if they did steal your Harry Potter backpack. Killers get caught!

Look how shocked MR. Bowling Ball is by this article
As a mystery writer, I'm always trying to find clever ways to kill people characters with common objects. Recently, I went bowling and so naturally I considered ways to kill people characters with a bowling ball.

Here are some classic ideas we've seen on television:

(1) Place a bowling ball precariously in the hall closet and when the intended victim opens the door, the bowling ball will fall off the shelf and onto the victim's head.
(2) Drop a well-timed ball from a 17th floor window.

Or what about these sad true stories:

A teen-ager enrolled in a residential program for young people with emotional problems was charged today with dropping a 16-pound bowling ball off an overpass here that crashed through the windshield of a car below...
Read more here: NY Times Article by Clifford Levy

A 45-year-old woman was arrested Monday on suspicion of attempted murder by hitting her husband on the head with a bowling ball while he was asleep at their home in Ichikawa, Chiba Prefecture...
Read more here: Weird Asia News

Jamal M. Dorsey Sr., 22, was gunned down and left to die in front of an Algiers home after he argued with a man who tried to use his bowling ball...
Read more here: New Orleans Nola.com

Have you ever thought of murdering a character with a bowling ball? Have you read of it happening in a novel or seen it happen on TV? 

Picture source here

Monday, 18 July 2011

Clarissa's Kindle Favourites & Great Free Reads

Calendar
Kindle Calendar by 7 Dragons

Price: $0.99
Producer: 7 Dragons
Link: here

I've downloaded a lot of games and apps for my Kindle, but this one is starting to become my favourite. Currently I carry around an agenda and my Kindle but together, they're heavy. Now, I've combined them.

This calendar has wonderful features: recurring events, to-do lists, backgrounds, easy shortcuts, and quick load time. For less than a dollar, it's a great buy!

Things I wish they would improve: On the main calendar page, you can see the month and the list of events for the current day. However, if the list has more items than four, you need to click the day to show your items. It's not difficult but I wish you could see it from the main screen.
Update: If you make the font small, you can see more of the list. Problem solved!


Another great Kindle Calendar app review: http://kappreview.com/2011/06/23/kindle-calendar-photos/
Picture source: here and here

Free Kindle Reads of the Week!

For the mystery lover:
Back on Murder

For the writer:
Writing Your Novel

For the Non-Fiction reader:
The Adventurous Boy's Handbook: For Ages 9 to 99


Tuesday, 12 July 2011

Clarissa's Writing: You may be a panster, but have your characters carry an agenda!

Don't let this happen to you: Your MC's wife invites her brother for dinner and the dinner just doesn't happen.

Why didn't it happen? Because my MCs and the stupid author that writes the about the MCs forgot to write it down in the "master agenda". Sure, the MC is a cop and cops forget about planned family dinners but the MC's wife wouldn't just forget to cook the meal, would she?

No.

So, I beg you, keep an agenda for your characters...somewhere. It will save you lots of time later.

Picture source: here

Monday, 11 July 2011

Clarissa Reads: Iron House by John Hart

Iron HouseIRON HOUSE
Writer: John Hart
Challenge: None

Kindle: Pre-order it here!
Genre: Thriller
How I read it: Free copy sent to me

Synopsis from Amazon:
An old man is dying.
When the old man is dead they will come for him.
And they will come for her, to make him hurt.

John Hart has written three New York Times bestsellers and won an unprecedented two back-to-back Edgar Awards. His books have been called “masterful” (Jeffery Deaver) and “gripping” (People) with “Grisham-style intrigue and Turow-style brooding” (The New York Times). Now he delivers his fourth novel—a gut-wrenching, heart-stopping thriller no reader will soon forget.

HE WOULD GO TO HELL
At the Iron Mountain Home for Boys, there was nothing but time. Time to burn and time to kill, time for two young orphans to learn that life isn’t won without a fight. Julian survives only because his older brother, Michael, is fearless and fiercely protective. When tensions boil over and a boy is brutally killed, there is only one sacrifice left for Michael to make: He flees the orphanage and takes the blame with him.

TO KEEP HER SAFE
For two decades, Michael has been an enforcer in New York’s world of organized crime, a prince of the streets so widely feared he rarely has to kill anymore. But the life he’s fought to build unravels when he meets Elena, a beautiful innocent who teaches him the meaning and power of love. He wants a fresh start with her, the chance to start a family like the one he and Julian never had. But someone else is holding the strings. And escape is not that easy. . . .

GO TO HELL, AND COME BACK BURNING
The mob boss who gave Michael his blessing to begin anew is dying, and his son is intent on making Michael pay for his betrayal. Determined to protect the ones he loves, Michael spirits Elena—who knows nothing of his past crimes, or the peril he’s laid at her door— back to North Carolina, to the place he was born and the brother he lost so long ago. There, he will encounter a whole new level of danger, a thicket of deceit and violence that leads inexorably to the one place he’s been running from his whole life: Iron House.
My Thoughts: In true thriller fashion, this book had me in its grips from beginning to end--I read the story in two days. Sure, some of it was a bit cliche and not very realistic, but it worked.

What I loved best about the book was uncovering the mystery behind Iron House. How did all the characters fit? I had my suspicions as to who was behind the various murders that took place throughout the story but the writer would then throw in a twist or two to make me doubt myself. Why would a Senator's wife want to adopt two orphan boys? And why did the Senator take such a sudden interest in Micheal's life? Each new revelation brought more questions until finally all is revealed in a satisfying ending.

I enjoyed his characters. There were no purely evil villains or perfectly good heroes. The good guys did some bad things and the bad guys did some good. One of my favorite characters was a man named Flint.

What book does it remind me of? 
David Morrell's Brotherhood of the Rose.

Parental Advisory: This is a thriller with mobsters - that means it has violence, torture for information, and swearing. Keep that in mind.

Wednesday, 6 July 2011

Clarissa's Questions - Book Reviews

Recently, I was emailed by the marketing department of a large publishing house. They wanted me to read a book by someone they represent. Of course I said yes--the book was something I was interested in reading and it was free.

Then it hit me, obviously the company knows:

(a) I have a blog
(b) I write book reviews
(c) I like reading mystery/thrillers

So the questions are:

(1) Have you ever been emailed about doing a book review before?
(2) Was it in the genre you like to read?
(3) Were you expected to give a good review?
(4) What did they expect of you?

Inquiring minds (me) wants to know.

Monday, 4 July 2011

Book Review: Agnes Grey by Anne Bronte

Agnes Grey (Arcturus Paperback Classics)
AGNES GREY
Writer: Anne Bronte
Challenge: None

Kindle: For free here or the illustrated version here for $0.99
Genre: Classic
How I read it: Kindle

Synopsis from Amazon: Anne began Agnes Grey with the words "All true histories contain instruction", and wrote in a realistic, rather than the romantic style followed by her sisters. The title character is the younger daughter of a poor clergyman and sets out to earn a living as a governess. Anne drew strongly on her own life. Her rather plain first-person female narrator begins the story young, inexperienced, and idealistic, but strives for self-respect and independence.

Agnes Grey is a wish-fulfillment story in which patience and virtue are rewarded. It is also a quiet but sharply pointed critique of the life of a governess and the instruction of children at the time. Anne portrays her characters and their surroundings with the minute attention to detail of a camera eye, focusing on the direct experience of daily life in a constrained environment, and recognizing the importance of subtle impressions. Anne's understated humor and occasional satire also remind the reader of Jane Austen.
My Thoughts: I liked it. Her way of writing is personable but detatched. It's like she was more intent on telling the story correctly rather than her feelings, which, in my opinion, is good because we saw a real glimpse into the governess life.

How does this story differ from Jane Eyre? 
Jane Eyre was also a governess but that book was a love story. How often does a master fall in love with his governess in real life? Rarely. This book had a more realistic feel. Anne told the story as if it was her life  (Anne was a governess as well as a writer) and I believed it. And a governess's life was not easy--solitary and without rights.

Anne touched on a few serious topics such as animal rights and the proper education of children. In the story one of Agnes' pupils had a HOBBY of torturing animals and the parents stood by and just laughed it off. It wouldn't have bothered me so much but I believe Anne probably drew on real life experiences.

Here are some of my favourite bits:



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