Monday, 2 April 2012

#A-Z: Death By... Bat

Who or what event is portrayed in this story?

Jim wanted another shut-out game. From his very first shut-out two years before, he aspired to striking out each player he went up against.
Holding the ball between his knees, he licked his palms and rubbed his face. The stubble scratched him.
While Brainard had pitched the first five innings and Jim had spent the innings in the infield, the six inning Jim was assigned to the pitcher’s mound—a place he felt comfortable. He kicked at the dirt beneath his shoe, digging in.
He gave the small ball a tight squeeze in his right hand then twirled it around in his fingers, determining the next pitch. Would he use his classic ‘speedball’ or his slower ‘dew-drop’? Some had described his pitch as low and swift, rising from the ground past the shoulder to the catcher but he didn’t care what they called it as long as the batter didn’t see it coming.
He nodded to the catcher and with imperceptible movement of either the elbow or wrist delivered the baseball with the speed of a cannon.
Strike three!
The team raised a shout and headed in, towards the dugout, patting each other on the back. One by one, the batters on his team stepped up to the plate. Jim had hit four doubles in four at bats. He couldn’t wait to get up to plate and score a home run.
When it was Jim’s turn, he grabbed his bat and headed out. He gave the catcher, George, a nod. Separating his hands on the bat, he swung his bat a few times in anticipation. The pitcher moved his head back and forth and shook out his shoulders.
‘Throw a nice one,’ repeated Jim in a whisper.
The ball was thrown and with little or no turn of the wrists, Jim swung. The incredible torque applied by the twisting motion of his upper body hit the ball with a loud crack.
‘Run, run, run,’ his teammates cheered behind him.
Jim watched the ball fly high in the air. Though the outfielders were all running back, he knew it would be a home run.
First base.
Second base.
Third base.
Finally, he reached home. The catcher was standing, glove at his side, not expecting to need it.
'I must have snapped my belt,' said Jim, referring to something he heard earlier.
George looked down at his waist and said, 'I guess not.'
Jim returned to the dug out, he wave to his adoring and cheering fans and accepted the complements and kind pats on the butt.
Little did he know, that would be the last game he ever played.
After the game, Jim began to experience severe pain in his abdomen and he died in his home on October 18 at the age of 21 years.

Who or what event is portrayed in this story?


The previous Death By … story is based on:
Valentin Bondarenko was a Ukrainian cosmonaut. On March 23, 1961, in the oxygen-rich atmosphere of a training simulator, he removed some biosensors from his body and used a cotton ball moistened with alcohol to wash the sticky stuff off his skin. He tossed the cotton ball aside and it landed on an electric hot plate, where it caught fire. The fire ignited Bondarenko's suit.

Because of the pressure difference between the simulator and outside, it took several minutes for an attending doctor to get in and help him. He suffered third-degree burns over nearly the whole of his body: only the soles of his feet were relatively unharmed, as his flight boots had protected them. He died of shock eight hours after the accident. 

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41 comments:

  1. Congrats, Glynis, you score a point!

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  2. Crap, it's baseball - I should know this one!

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  3. Well you've got me Clarissa but it's past my bedtime.

    Denise

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  4. I promise to make the stories shorter over the next few days.

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  5. Geez, I'm saddened at baffled at the same time. Answer please...

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  6. I don't know the story but it is clear that he popped a stomach muscle when he torqued to swing at the ball.
    These are so interesting! I'll be back...

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  7. As a fan I should know this story but don't.

    Well done Clarissa and certainly fitting for the approach of opening day this week.

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  8. I love your writing. You held my attention through the entire story.

    T

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  9. I have no clue, Clarissa. Sorry. But it was well-written, I'll say that.
    Karen

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  10. Whew! That is an incredible story. I have no idea - don't follow baseball but I'm loving your retellings.

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  11. I don't know. But I'll be back tomorrow to find out.

    So sad, yesterday's story.

    Great job.
    Heather

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  12. Love your premise for the A-Z.... A terrific start to the challenge!

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  13. Oh yesterday's poor man was Ukrainian! Wow - what a story!

    As for this one - it's baseball - a game I don't understand but if it's anything like rounders, you hit the ball with the bat and run as fast as you can in a circle! it's some poor young guy good at what he does but who died suddenly or he had some kind of disease without realising?

    Take care
    x

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  14. Great post! Baseball is, after all, America's past-time.

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  15. baseball and wow, that was great!

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  16. I don't have a clue as to what went wrong there. Nor do I know what event this refers. Guess I'll see tomorrow.

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  17. Great entry, Clarissa. I wasn't familiar with the story...very interesting! Poor guy.

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  18. Your A-Z theme is brilliant, Clarissa! I'm not familiar with death by bat, though. I'll check back tomorrow for the answer. P.S. I tried to sign up to follow by email, but I guess it's been disabled. Just wondered if you knew?

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  19. I tip my hat to Glynis, too.

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  20. Wow. Gruesome yet entertaining. I like!

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  21. Clarissa - Oh, now that is an interesting baseball death! I'm really liking your innovative approach here!

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  22. WOW on that story. I wouldn't have thought that someone could even die like that. :(

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  23. Great to "know" you via A-Zchallenge, Clarissa! Thanks for dropping by my blog :)

    Love your take on A-Z and can't wait to see what more is in store this month... Off to read the previous entry!

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  24. Think you're talking about "Brian's Song" - ohhh, what a sad, sad story. And speaking of baseball, a friend gave hub two tickets to a Boston Red Sox training game tomorrow. He's like a kid in a candy shop. He so wants me to go, so I will (with a smile) but I did entertain thoughts of joining the French Foreign Legion, LOL!

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  25. When I saw the blog title I thought it was going to be the animal.

    Obviously I was wrong, and it's baseball. Excellent death scene.

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  26. I have no idea but the story is very interesting, and of course, well-written. Look forward to the answer.

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  27. I think you're writing about Jim Creighton (spelling?), a baseball player from the nineteenth century. Before baseball was what it is now! Such a sad death, especially because he was so young :(

    And I didn't know about the cosmonaut. So sad! Beware of hot plates, yikes.

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  28. ah, I thought it will be a death by real bat, like in flying mouse :)

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  29. OMG, how did I miss the second part? I remember when this happened. Sad!

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  30. So, I had to find out and I'm hoping I'm right because to die from torquing the way it sounds like he did, well, he did some serious damage to his abdominal area. The player's name is Jim Creighton. But I'll be back tomorrow to find out the answer.

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  31. I don't know if I'm going to get a single point this month...

    that poor cosmonaut - what a horrible experience!

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  32. I don't know this one either. Sounds like he ruptured something, though.

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  33. I haven't a clue, but I'm enjoying these posts.

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  34. Wow! I'm loving your theme, Clarissa, although I have no clue who died by bat. :)

    Cherie Reich - Author

    Surrounded by Books Reviews

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  35. This is a great approach to the A-Z...however I have no idea again what this is. Thought for a minute, but no, no idea. The first one I had never heard of but what a story. I'll be here everyday!

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  36. Oh my goodness! How freaky. Good thing I only played a little softball and never could bat quickly enough. :P

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  37. hahah when I first arrived here I was expecting a story about the animal, like it spreading plague or something ;)

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  38. As this concerns baseball I have no idea who or what is the truth behind this story!

    We don't play baseball in the UK - nearest thing is rounders - same premise of hitting a ball and getting round all four bases. Usually only played by girls, though! ;-p

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