Wednesday, 20 June 2012

Evidence

The Alphabet in Crime Fiction - The concept was started by Kerrie at Mysteries in Paradise. This week's letter is the letter E.


Here are the rules: By Friday of each week participants try to write a blog post about crime fiction related to the letter of the week. Your post MUST be related to either the first letter of a book's title, the first letter of an author's first name, or the first letter of the author's surname, or even maybe a crime fiction "topic". But above all, it has to be crime fiction. You could write a review, or a bio of an author, so long as it fits the rules somehow.

EVIDENCE

Writing a mystery is difficult. Not only do you have to remember to sprinkle in just enough clues and red-herrings, but you have to make sure you deal properly with the evidence.

Ever read a mystery and wonder what happened with the shoe print they took? Or thought they should have fingerprinted the scene but for some reason they didn't. That's because the writer forgot to keep track of the evidence.

At a crime scene, there is a great deal of evidence to collect: photographs, sketches, fluids, fingerprints, witness statements, the list goes on... As a writer, you not only need to keep track of what the officers do but what the crime scene investigators have done.

How do we do that?

Here are two things I do:

(a) carry a detective's notebook - you've all seen the crime series where the detectives write down notes in a little black book. Why not do the same. If you don't want to use a real notebook, save a Word file or, as in my case, use Scrivener's document note taking feature.

(b) write an evidence checklist - make sure you write down all the evidence that could have possibly been collected at the crime scene. Even if you know that evidence isn't vital to solving the case, make sure it's touched upon somewhere in the novel. Using evidence that may seem important to the reader to focus on a certain suspect rather than the real one, is a good way to mislead the reader and add a twist to your story.

How do you keep track of your evidence?

Also, authors I want to check out that start with the Letter E:

EDGAR WALLACE
Richard Horatio Edgar Wallace (1 April 1875 – 10 February 1932) was an English crime writer, journalist, novelist, screenwriter, and playwright, who wrote 175 novels, 24 plays, and numerous articles in newspapers and journals. Over 160 films have been made of his novels. In the 1920s, one of Wallace's publishers claimed that a quarter of all books read in England were written by him. He is most famous today as the co-creator of King Kong, writing the early screenplay and story for the movie, as well as a short story "King Kong" (1933) credited to him and Draycott Dell. He was known for the J. G. Reeder detective stories, The Four Just Men, The Ringer, and for creating the Green Archer character during his lifetime.

The Door with Seven Locks -Dick Martin is leaving Scotland Yard. His final job, investigating a stolen book, takes him via a conversation with the librarian Sybil Lansdown to Gallows Cottage and a meeting with Doctor Stalletti. Tommy Crawler, Bertram Cody's chauffeur is also there. Arriving home, Martin finds Lew Pheeney being followed by a man for whom he recently worked. 'Doing what?' demands Martin. Lew finally confesses. 'I was trying to open a dead man's tomb!'


EMILY BRIGHTWELL
Emily Brightwell was born in West Virginia and moved to Los Angeles in the early sixties. On a visit to England in 1975, she met her future husband, Richard and were married in May 1976 and lived in a small village outside London. In 1988 she began her new career as a fiction writer. She jumped at the chance to write a Victorian mystery series for Berkley and used original London newspapers from the 1880s and a host of books on Victorian households for research. These books and newspapers were priceless guides to her understanding of the real Victorian world of Inspector Witherspoon and Mrs. Jeffries.

Mrs. Jefferies Takes the Cake  - The evidence was all there: a dead body, two dessert plates, and a gun. As if poor Mr. Ashbury had been sharing cake with his own killer! Now, Mrs. Jeffries and her staff must do some snooping around. They're more than happy to help dish up some clues...


Sources: Wikipedia and Amazon.com
Writing and selling your mystery novel by Ephron

33 comments:

  1. Great ideas. If I depend on my memory then the evidence will not measure up.

    T

    ReplyDelete
  2. Misleading the reader is what it's all about.

    ReplyDelete
  3. I can only imagine the plotting you must do to set up a great mystery! I'd love to try it sometime... maybe I will!

    Best to you~ <3

    ReplyDelete
  4. This sounds like a fun theme for Fridays. Maybe I need to replace my Weekend Follies for the summer. Change is good. Thanks for the always informative post.

    ReplyDelete
  5. I'm afraid I'm *not* as proactive as you are and sometimes I catch my errors during editing. Sometimes the editors do, which isn't as fun for me!

    Good tips here!

    ReplyDelete
  6. I use to have it all over the place. Then I found Scrivener software. I keep it all in there.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Great post. I laughed out loud at the part about the shoe, because I have finished a book and said, what happened to the???

    Reading (and loving) The Sholes Key Now :D

    ReplyDelete
  8. a good mystery can't be beat--i love the info about the lady writing the victorian book--

    ReplyDelete
  9. Hmmm...you've just given me an idea.

    Thanks.

    ReplyDelete
  10. I kind of wonder how authentic the evidence is on shows like Bones. You see them use luminol and an ultraviolet light and Bones always says, "Blood here," but I always wondered...are there other things that luminesce? How does Bones know it's instantly blood. But for the sake of the show, it speeds things along.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Clarissa - I like the idea of keeping an evidence checklist. You're right that it's hard to keep track of the evidence otherwise. And a list like that helps the author to scatter the clues appropriately and throw in the right number of "red herrings" too.

    ReplyDelete
  12. I like the evidence notebook idea.

    ReplyDelete
  13. This is why I don't think I'd ever dare write a crime story! LOL! Oh but I do like a good detective story/show though! Yay! Take care
    x

    ReplyDelete
  14. oh, I do hate it when they mention and evidence or some detail in the plot and then forget about it....

    ReplyDelete
  15. An evidence notebook is a really good idea. I didn't need it for my first book, but I can see a need for it in the future. Thanks! :)

    ReplyDelete
  16. Good post. I recently went to the science museum and they had an exhibition that let you go through and try to solve a (fake) murder with all the tools of evidence, it was a real eye opener including the expected (finger prints, sketches etc) and things I hadn't considered (analyzing shards of glass, animal poops, bullets, fibers etc.). I don't know how anyone ever gets away with a crime!

    ReplyDelete
  17. I have to keep a list for everything in my writing - all the characters and their names and what they like to eat and breathe and if they snore.... gawd... they're so NEEDY... I can't imagine writing down evidence, too!

    ReplyDelete
  18. You writers never cease to amaze me!

    ReplyDelete
  19. I think that the evidence is one big reason why I love reading crime fiction, but will probably never write it. :-)

    ReplyDelete
  20. I'm particularly fond of Chekov's gun. Where something seemingly useless/pointless detail suddenly becomes very significant.

    And if you forget one of those, it's fine. It'll just appear as a useless/pointless detail.

    ReplyDelete
  21. I loved the info on Edgar Wallace and the tips. I'm a new follower, and your name sounds perfect for a mystery writer.
    Great post!

    ReplyDelete
  22. Great advice. My trusty notebook is the only way that I can keep track of the details, such as evidence, that I need to remember.

    ReplyDelete
  23. Interesting information on evidence in a crime novel. I will have to pay more attention the next time I read a police procedural. Edgar Wallace sounds interesting. I read one Emily Brightwell novel; maybe I should try another one, since she put so much into the research.

    ReplyDelete
  24. Clarissa: In defending cases I generally start by putting the evidence collected in chronological order as that is how I remember information best. I then work to figure out whether there is evidence that should have been collected or found by the police and is missing.

    ReplyDelete
  25. great post, Clarissa. You do have some great ideas. I don't know how yuou keep up!

    ReplyDelete
  26. When I have a crime in a novel, I tend to be silly and try to remember to write in the important stuff. I find that it's in editing that I fill the gaping holes. Not good.

    ReplyDelete
  27. You did a great job with evidence in your book - which I just finished! :) What a fantastic read.

    ReplyDelete
  28. I like the idea of having a detective's notebook - might help in thinking like him/her too.

    ReplyDelete
  29. Great tips on keeping track of evidence!

    ReplyDelete
  30. This is really helpful and a great reminder to tie up the loose ends for the reader!
    Heather

    ReplyDelete
  31. I don't write mysteries or pure suspense, but I do need to keep track of things.

    That's actually a great idea to keep a personal notebook and an evidence check sheet.

    You can do that with One Note software, or using your comment feature, I use comment feature and have a separate sheet in the story file for those notes.

    Sia McKye OVER COFFEE

    ReplyDelete
  32. Hi Clarissa .. interesting post - and keeping up with the times, or going back with the times .. I sometimes get rattled with tv series back then .. Cheers Hilary

    ReplyDelete

If you don't have anything nice to say, say it anyway.

Popular Posts